Black and white pinhole Critique

This is a black and white pinhole photograph. It is most likely been in shot in a city. The intention was to show the word slow that is written on the street. The word slow is written on the wider part of the street and with the motion blur it leads you into the narrower part of the street. I like how to this picture is set up because it says slow but then make you want to continue down the really tiny path of the street while the building keep going with the street. I like how it is mysterious because of the way the street is dark in the front and while it keeps going back the street gets a lot lighter. This picture is successful in my point of view just because of the word slow is a motion blur and how the edges of the pictures are very dark.